When I Take the Shot
By:
Age:
Izach Pearson
10
It is about the camaraderie of competing together on a teem.
After waiting and waiting I’m finally on the field.
Running all the way down with the wind viciously blowing in my face.
I make a pass to my teammate and my opponents immediately swarm him like a crowd of bees
He tries to make a pass but the defenders ferociously steal the soccer ball from him.
I fell back with my teammates but the player had already shot
We are all so worried about what might happen next
It goes to the top right corner of the net and I hold my breath
Luckily our goalie jumps up and saves it and I breath again
I have the ball once more but the defenders are coming at me quick
So based on instinct I make another pass which gets my defenders off me.
I run into the net and I feel so much pressure when I finally get a pass.
I then turn around and take the shot.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.