When I Take the Shot
By:
Age:
Izach Pearson
10
It is about the camaraderie of competing together on a teem.
After waiting and waiting I’m finally on the field.
Running all the way down with the wind viciously blowing in my face.
I make a pass to my teammate and my opponents immediately swarm him like a crowd of bees
He tries to make a pass but the defenders ferociously steal the soccer ball from him.
I fell back with my teammates but the player had already shot
We are all so worried about what might happen next
It goes to the top right corner of the net and I hold my breath
Luckily our goalie jumps up and saves it and I breath again
I have the ball once more but the defenders are coming at me quick
So based on instinct I make another pass which gets my defenders off me.
I run into the net and I feel so much pressure when I finally get a pass.
I then turn around and take the shot.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing