Verdant and Lively
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
Raphi wants to convey to his readers of the importance of true friendship.
Verdant and lively are the fields of the spring,
Where the beauty of nature doth gently sing.
And in this season of love and care,
We celebrate the bond of our friendship so rare.
With gentle whispers, the flowers do smile,
Their petals spread as if to say, “Stay awhile.”
And with a glance, the blue sky so bright,
It emits warmth with comfort and delight.
A golden sun, so warm and so bright,
With beams that dance in the sky of pure light.
Like a light in the dark, a friend does shine,
Bringing comfort, hope, and love so divine.
Oh, the joy of a bond that is strong,
A connection that is always right.
With a heart so pure, a soul so fair,
A friendship that is a treasure so rare.
And so, on this day of love and care,
We celebrate our bond beyond compare.
A friendship that blooms, like the flowers so bright,
A love that shines in the warm sun’s light.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.