
Verdant and Lively
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
Raphi wants to convey to his readers of the importance of true friendship.
Verdant and lively are the fields of the spring,
Where the beauty of nature doth gently sing.
And in this season of love and care,
We celebrate the bond of our friendship so rare.
With gentle whispers, the flowers do smile,
Their petals spread as if to say, “Stay awhile.”
And with a glance, the blue sky so bright,
It emits warmth with comfort and delight.
A golden sun, so warm and so bright,
With beams that dance in the sky of pure light.
Like a light in the dark, a friend does shine,
Bringing comfort, hope, and love so divine.
Oh, the joy of a bond that is strong,
A connection that is always right.
With a heart so pure, a soul so fair,
A friendship that is a treasure so rare.
And so, on this day of love and care,
We celebrate our bond beyond compare.
A friendship that blooms, like the flowers so bright,
A love that shines in the warm sun’s light.

Mr Ajay Mehta

spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani

Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani

Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
D

Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D

magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
D

Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
D

Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani

spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
D

Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
D

Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
D

Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D

Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing


