The Hint of Hope
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This poem shows you to never ever give up even when the times are hard. Hope is the thing that let's hopelessness disappear.
You feel like giving up, like there is nothing you could do.
You feel melancholy seeping through you.
You feel like letting go, of your last hint of hope.
But, wait.
Hope.
Even a little bit of hope.
Let it take over.
Hope will lead your way.
Slowly, it will win the battle,
Between faith and despair.
It will power through, like a torch in the dark.
It will light up your way,
Keeping you trying.
It's best to show grit, when times are hard.
To achieve your goal, you must try your best.
Hope is the thing, encouraging you.
Never give up.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing