The Gift of the Ocean
By:
Age:
Phoenix Roberts
10
Sometimes in life we need to slow down and remind ourselves to enjoy the great beauties around us. Phoenix has a deep passion for sea life and making a difference in this world. This poem hopefully inspires others to appreciate the world around us as it comes in many forms.
I am looking at dolphins swimming
across
the tie-dye blue sea,
and the sand blowing in the cold
wind
I hear the waves pounding against the shore,
and the whales bellowing above the waves
I smell crisp, salty sea air,
and a strong aroma coming from
slimy, green seaweed
I feel the damp, cool morning dew on my face
and the warm sand in my toes
that is as soft as a pillow
I love when I spend time
near interesting sea creatures
It gives me inner peace
and makes me smile.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.