The Best Teacher.
By:
Age:
Paxton Dillon
11
Funny rhyming poem to help brighten up your day.
We were going to the grocery store to get something to eat
Then came along my teacher whose name was Mrs. Beet
She asked if we wanted to come to her house to have a bite to eat
We said to her that it sounded kind of neat
We went to her house which was down a long street
We walked into her house and she said take a seat
We were just about to eat a plate full of meat
When out came her husband whose name was Mr. Pete
Then he said "Why use your hands let's eat with our feet."
When we finished Mrs. Beet came out with a treat
The treat was made of ice cream and wheat
After the treat we sang a song yet we were of beat
When we left Mr. Pete and Mrs. Beet said "That was a fun little treat!"
And then we replied "You're the best teacher ever Mrs. Beet!"
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.