The Best Teacher.
By:
Age:
Paxton Dillon
11
Funny rhyming poem to help brighten up your day.
We were going to the grocery store to get something to eat
Then came along my teacher whose name was Mrs. Beet
She asked if we wanted to come to her house to have a bite to eat
We said to her that it sounded kind of neat
We went to her house which was down a long street
We walked into her house and she said take a seat
We were just about to eat a plate full of meat
When out came her husband whose name was Mr. Pete
Then he said "Why use your hands let's eat with our feet."
When we finished Mrs. Beet came out with a treat
The treat was made of ice cream and wheat
After the treat we sang a song yet we were of beat
When we left Mr. Pete and Mrs. Beet said "That was a fun little treat!"
And then we replied "You're the best teacher ever Mrs. Beet!"
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing