The Beauty Of Nature
By:
Age:
Laurene Y.
11
This poem shows how you can appreciate the nature around us. How beautiful, wonderful it is.
I step outside.
My barefoot feet feel the soft green grass as it brushes my feet gently.
I look around.
I see thriving emerald green bushes, blooming with multi-colored blossoms.
I see a tall tree, towering above me,
it's branches spread across like a gigantic spiderweb.
I see the mountains, massive and titanic as it is,
with patches of green and purple and pink.
I see a little stream, wending through the ground.
I look up.
I see birds, soaring across the sky like a jet,
with it's powerful wings gliding.
I see the fluffy clouds spaced out,
spread across the vast blue sky above me.
I see Nature.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.