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The Beauty Of Nature

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Laurene Y.

11

This poem shows how you can appreciate the nature around us. How beautiful, wonderful it is.

I step outside.
My barefoot feet feel the soft green grass as it brushes my feet gently.
I look around.
I see thriving emerald green bushes, blooming with multi-colored blossoms.
I see a tall tree, towering above me,
it's branches spread across like a gigantic spiderweb.
I see the mountains, massive and titanic as it is,
with patches of green and purple and pink.
I see a little stream, wending through the ground.
I look up.
I see birds, soaring across the sky like a jet,
with it's powerful wings gliding.
I see the fluffy clouds spaced out,
spread across the vast blue sky above me.
I see Nature.

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Mr Ajay Mehta

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spring

Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.

Devika Udani

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Magnificent Friendship

Friendship is very important in life!

Devika Udani

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Wonders of Nature

Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.

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Wonders of Nature

So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.

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magnificant friendship

So true about friendship. Well written.

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Nature's Beauties

How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.

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Friendship Poem

Well written about friendship and true at any age

Sarena Udani

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spring

My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”

I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!

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Friendship Poem

Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.

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Friendship Poem

I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.

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Friends

So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.

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Be You

So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing

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