My Own Unique Me
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
I am a never ending adventure
A book whose story will never shut
But I still have chapters in my life
I see them beginning and ending
I hear my flipping pages
And I wonder if my story is going too fast
I am the notes on a piece of music
I pretend to not feel disturbed
When they play me wrong
I see all the eyes staring at me
I worry if my melody
Is too high or too low
I am a painting
Each stroke represents my life
Each color represents my characteristics
I see my life getting illustrated out everyday
With conflict, solutions, and problems
I am my own unique me.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.