My Own Unique Me
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
I am a never ending adventure
A book whose story will never shut
But I still have chapters in my life
I see them beginning and ending
I hear my flipping pages
And I wonder if my story is going too fast
I am the notes on a piece of music
I pretend to not feel disturbed
When they play me wrong
I see all the eyes staring at me
I worry if my melody
Is too high or too low
I am a painting
Each stroke represents my life
Each color represents my characteristics
I see my life getting illustrated out everyday
With conflict, solutions, and problems
I am my own unique me.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing