My Loving Mother
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
You are my mother
You’re caring and sweet
You’re intelligent, sympathetic
You made my life complete
You care for your children
Like a mother bear
When I’m in trouble
You’ll always be there
Your kiss of kindness
Is savory and sweet
It is like
A pleasant treat,
Your support is like
A dolphin’s pod in the sea
When I need help
You’ll always help me
You’re compassionate
With incomparable empathy
It’s like a blooming flower
With petals of beauty
You’re caring and sweet
With love like no other
You’re intelligent, sympathetic
You are my mother
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
D
magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
D
Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing