Hue of the Beach
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
Raphi would like to convey to his readers that even if they feel there's no way out, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel.
A warm sun sets on golden sands,
Like a smile spreading across the land.
The sea whispers secrets to the shore,
And the waves dance like never before.
The trees sway as old friends reunited,
Their branches waving, they seem delighted.
A gentle breeze strokes my hair,
And the world around me seems to care.
The clouds above are like cotton balls,
Drifting lazily across the blue sky's halls.
The sun bids goodbye with a wink,
And I know that everything will be okay.
This moment in time feels like a dream,
A memory I'll cherish forever, it seems.
Nature's beauty fills me with light,
And I know everything will be alright.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.