Hue of the Beach
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
Raphi would like to convey to his readers that even if they feel there's no way out, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel.
A warm sun sets on golden sands,
Like a smile spreading across the land.
The sea whispers secrets to the shore,
And the waves dance like never before.
The trees sway as old friends reunited,
Their branches waving, they seem delighted.
A gentle breeze strokes my hair,
And the world around me seems to care.
The clouds above are like cotton balls,
Drifting lazily across the blue sky's halls.
The sun bids goodbye with a wink,
And I know that everything will be okay.
This moment in time feels like a dream,
A memory I'll cherish forever, it seems.
Nature's beauty fills me with light,
And I know everything will be alright.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing