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Hue of the Beach

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JR Afra

11

Raphi would like to convey to his readers that even if they feel there's no way out, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel.

A warm sun sets on golden sands,
Like a smile spreading across the land.
The sea whispers secrets to the shore,
And the waves dance like never before.
The trees sway as old friends reunited,
Their branches waving, they seem delighted.
A gentle breeze strokes my hair,
And the world around me seems to care.
The clouds above are like cotton balls,
Drifting lazily across the blue sky's halls.
The sun bids goodbye with a wink,
And I know that everything will be okay.
This moment in time feels like a dream,
A memory I'll cherish forever, it seems.
Nature's beauty fills me with light,
And I know everything will be alright.

average rating is 3 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

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Poonam sharma

average rating is 4 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

magnificant friendship

The simplicity of the poems and the deep care and love for relationships

Swati Mehta

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs
Bees eat the delicious nectar
off the flowers.

Love these lines. These lines so aptly describes the nature during spring time❤️❤️

Shashi Jaggia

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

Takes the reader there to wonderful setting of a beautiful spring day with the shining sun, flowers, soft and delicate petals, the bees, the smell of spring!

Shashi Jaggia

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

Nora touched all my senses with the sun, the flowers with the delightful smells, the cozy soft petals, the thunder! Very well written and takes the reader to the beautiful setting created by the poem.

Shashi Jaggia

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

Wonders of Nature

I can imagine the scene with the animals playing by the creek.
Amazing how she talks about saying goodbye to childhood being a child herself! Time does go by fast.

Shashi Jaggia

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

magnificant friendship

It is so true and from the heart. Friendship is like a seed!

Priya dua

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

magnificant friendship

I love this poem because by the end, I realize that she’s making a subtle but powerful connection between the animals she writes about and childhood. I first visualize animals playing but by the end I visualize children instead. It brings nostalgia to the reader and is very powerful!

Priya dua

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

magnificant friendship

What a powerful and perfect simile to compare friendship to a seed! Both are powerful and life affirming, and I love how the author uses the word “deep” both literally for a seed, and metaphorically for friendship. Very honest and powerful!

Priya dua

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

A beautiful poem, because it transports the reader to that essence of spring, that we all know and love. I can see and smell all the sites. My favorite part is how she compares the petals of flowers to being cozy seats for bugs. Wonderful imagery and use of metaphors.

Priya Dua

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

Beautiful imagery! A great poem because it transports the reader to that special essence of spring which everyone loves!

Priya Dua

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

spring

Beautiful imagery! I can see the sun and bees, and smell the flowers and spring smell. The best poem because it transports you emotionally. Wonderful!

Mr Ajay Mehta

average rating is 5 out of 5, based on 150 votes, Product ratings

magnificant friendship

Loved the line “Friendship is a seed “

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