Gift of Christmas
By:
Age:
Avery Li
11
The gift of Christmas is wrapped in happiness
It looks like ecstatic smiles spread across friend’s and family’s faces
Radiant, vivid, colorful decor gleams with brilliance
Stunning presents sparkle with elated joy
The gift of Christmas is wrapped in jubilance
It sounds like cheerful, delighted laughter
Sheets of luminous snow falls from the sky
Silver snowflakes dance and smile at me as they fall
The gift of Christmas is wrapped in tranquility
The smell of sweet gingerbread glides across the room
The aroma of peppermint drifts through the air, filling my house with light
Delectable treats smell of a fresh, savory scent
The gift of Christmas is wrapped in warmth
The feel of warm hugs straps me in a bundle of joy
My comfy cozy clothes keep me warm
My dazzling Christmas tree gleams with lights as bright as the sun
Wrapped in happiness, jubilance, tranquility, and warmth
The gift of Christmas
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.