Compassionate Symphony
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
A tribute to my wonderful mother.
My mother taught me how to work hard,
to never give up, to always guard,
my dreams, my goals, and my every desire.
A mindset that makes every day marvelous,
like a ray of sunshine that pierces the clouds;
It lifts me when I feel down.
Giving back to refugees is her call.
A compassion that makes my heart stand tall,
like a river that flows with empathy,
I help those in need and set them free.
Teamwork is the final lesson she taught,
a collaboration that cannot be bought,
like a symphony playing in perfect sync,
we work together and never shrink.
So I take these lessons to heart and soul,
and make them my guide, my lifelong goal,
to work hard, think positively, give back, and team up,
and always keep going until I reach the top.
Olivia
The Bright Blue Ocean
Very moving and immersive, brings the right touch of nostalgia and emotion to make the poem feel like it’s reaching you personally.
Alcantar Family
My Friends Make Me Happy
Love the poem’s rhythm and message to live your authentic-self!
Alcantar Family
Love
The young poetic author captured & conveyed the timeless power of the emotion to/feel “Love.”
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
I like how the writer describes the fruit.
Josean Jarvis
Fantastic Spring Fruits
what I like about this form the most is how the writer describe the fruit and how funny the poem.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This was funny and cool! I appreciate my friends. We are all different, but cool!
Lewis Roberts
Grateful for Life
Very touching & moving by our grandson as he salutes his family & his life. Thank you & always love.
John Brown
My Friends Make Me Happy
This poem made
Kamilah Brown
Love
This captures the very essence of what’s needed right now in the world! Bravo young lad!
Lewis Roberts
My Friends Make Me Happy
It was about his happiness that gave me a happy feeling too.
Lewis Roberts
Fantastic Spring Fruits
It made you want to eat the fruit Phoenix mentioned & see if you had his same reactions.
Valerie
The Gift of the Ocean
This poem makes me smile. Well written and comes from the heart.