Compassionate Symphony
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
A tribute to my wonderful mother.
My mother taught me how to work hard,
to never give up, to always guard,
my dreams, my goals, and my every desire.
A mindset that makes every day marvelous,
like a ray of sunshine that pierces the clouds;
It lifts me when I feel down.
Giving back to refugees is her call.
A compassion that makes my heart stand tall,
like a river that flows with empathy,
I help those in need and set them free.
Teamwork is the final lesson she taught,
a collaboration that cannot be bought,
like a symphony playing in perfect sync,
we work together and never shrink.
So I take these lessons to heart and soul,
and make them my guide, my lifelong goal,
to work hard, think positively, give back, and team up,
and always keep going until I reach the top.
Mr Ajay Mehta
spring
Beautifully written!!! Simple words put together in such a flowing way !! Loved it.
Devika Udani
Magnificent Friendship
Friendship is very important in life!
Devika Udani
Wonders of Nature
Beautiful poem with the message “ even animals have kindness in them”! They do not leave without eachother.
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Wonders of Nature
So true about nature as to how it nurtures the babies and then let them go free. Wow.
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magnificant friendship
So true about friendship. Well written.
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Nature's Beauties
How nature nurtures it’s own creation in childhood and then let them go free.
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Friendship Poem
Well written about friendship and true at any age
Sarena Udani
spring
My favorite line is “Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs”
I love the image of a cozy seat for a bug!
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Friendship Poem
Well written and very true about friends and the value of true friendship.
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Friendship Poem
I love this poem as it narrates the importance of friendship.
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Friends
So true to read at any age and true friends are forever.
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Be You
So fluid , so smooth and I got immersed in the spring reality of the poem. Very refreshing