Compassionate Symphony
By:
Age:
JR Afra
11
A tribute to my wonderful mother.
My mother taught me how to work hard,
to never give up, to always guard,
my dreams, my goals, and my every desire.
A mindset that makes every day marvelous,
like a ray of sunshine that pierces the clouds;
It lifts me when I feel down.
Giving back to refugees is her call.
A compassion that makes my heart stand tall,
like a river that flows with empathy,
I help those in need and set them free.
Teamwork is the final lesson she taught,
a collaboration that cannot be bought,
like a symphony playing in perfect sync,
we work together and never shrink.
So I take these lessons to heart and soul,
and make them my guide, my lifelong goal,
to work hard, think positively, give back, and team up,
and always keep going until I reach the top.
Poonam sharma
magnificant friendship
The simplicity of the poems and the deep care and love for relationships
Swati Mehta
spring
Delicate petals and soft flowers
Are cozy seats for bugs
Bees eat the delicious nectar
off the flowers.
Love these lines. These lines so aptly describes the nature during spring time❤️❤️
Shashi Jaggia
spring
Takes the reader there to wonderful setting of a beautiful spring day with the shining sun, flowers, soft and delicate petals, the bees, the smell of spring!
Shashi Jaggia
spring
Nora touched all my senses with the sun, the flowers with the delightful smells, the cozy soft petals, the thunder! Very well written and takes the reader to the beautiful setting created by the poem.
Shashi Jaggia
Wonders of Nature
I can imagine the scene with the animals playing by the creek.
Amazing how she talks about saying goodbye to childhood being a child herself! Time does go by fast.
Shashi Jaggia
magnificant friendship
It is so true and from the heart. Friendship is like a seed!
Priya dua
magnificant friendship
I love this poem because by the end, I realize that she’s making a subtle but powerful connection between the animals she writes about and childhood. I first visualize animals playing but by the end I visualize children instead. It brings nostalgia to the reader and is very powerful!
Priya dua
magnificant friendship
What a powerful and perfect simile to compare friendship to a seed! Both are powerful and life affirming, and I love how the author uses the word “deep” both literally for a seed, and metaphorically for friendship. Very honest and powerful!
Priya dua
spring
A beautiful poem, because it transports the reader to that essence of spring, that we all know and love. I can see and smell all the sites. My favorite part is how she compares the petals of flowers to being cozy seats for bugs. Wonderful imagery and use of metaphors.
Priya Dua
spring
Beautiful imagery! A great poem because it transports the reader to that special essence of spring which everyone loves!
Priya Dua
spring
Beautiful imagery! I can see the sun and bees, and smell the flowers and spring smell. The best poem because it transports you emotionally. Wonderful!
Mr Ajay Mehta
magnificant friendship
Loved the line “Friendship is a seed “